I started this segment for those artist who look for criticism and ways to make their music better. Some people will tell you ANYTHING even if ya music sounds like complete GARBAGE. This is where I need you to be COMPLETELY HONEST! No positive comments please (unless you see fit). Let the SLANDER begin!!
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For what it's worth (since you asked):
ReplyDelete1) If you have something great, you don't have to tell people what your name is at the beginning of the track. They'll know who you are as soon as you open your mouth.
2) The bass and the guitar need more variety. Too repetitive, the guitar tone is pretty bad, and the note selection isn't much better. Did you create the track or just download it?
3) What happened with the chorus? It's not catchy or memorable. People have to *feel* it.
Keep working. You got this.
Niiice JMach!! Yeah, the beat was from another song that's out the moment, I just rapped over the instrumental. The next one posted will most defitinely be a full some, chorus included.
ReplyDeleteThanks again! Very nice points!